Major Project Production Unit - Feedback From Beth and Simon

Its really great that we were able to get some important feedback today from both Beth and Simon as we are at the point where all the film is on the timeline and at a fine cut. Although the ending needed tightening, I felt this was the first time that they could see it as a whole and see if it all comes together well. We had scheduled to have a tutorial with Beth in the afternoon and see Simon after but unfortunatly the computers were down due to an IT issue and we were not able to access the edit. Myself and Andreya both spoke to Beth and explained our situation as we would still of loved to get her feedback. She understood that it was a situation we could not help and she would still be willing to give feedback if we sent her a link through Simon to review it and send us an email back.

Once the computers were back up we sent Simon a link to the edit. The following day myself and Andreya recieved an email which had both Simon and Beths feedback on it. You can see the email below:

This feedback was really helpful for us to move forward with the edit. I feel Simons comments about the audio are exactly what we need to focus on to make sure everything is up to standard. Beths comments about the grade are something that we plan to do when the edit is finished so this is something that I will ensure we focus on once its done. Both of them mention the ending which is what we both expected. They explained that the ending feels a little bit rushed and that I needed some different music. It also could be experiemented with more with different shots and angles to make it work well with the other scenes. Myself and Andreya will work on this to make sure we get it looking as good as it can be.